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How to Fix Dangling and Misplaced Modifiers

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Instructions

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Understand what dangling modifiers and misplaced modifiers are. A "dangling modifier" just dangles at the beginning of the sentence, unconnected to any logical subject. A "misplaced modifier" is just that -- out of place. The thing it's describing is there, but the two are not properly linked.
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Watch out for "-ing" words at the beginning of a sentence -- these often signal a dangling modifier, or participle. Take a look at this sentence: "When writing, modifiers can help you clarify your points." The first part of the sentence, "When writing," is a dangling modifier. Why? Because the word that follows it --"modifiers" -- doesn't follow. Modifiers write? Really? Think about what the writer really wants to say: "When you are writing, modifiers can help you clarify your points."
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Fix dangling modifiers in two ways: by adding a subject into the modifier itself, or by adding the logical subject immediately after the modifier. Try both ways to see what works for your sentence; sometimes, both methods will work. The first fix was in Step 2. Here's another: "When writing, you can use modifiers to help you clarify your points."
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Beware of passive verbs -- they can lead to dangling modifiers. Passive verbs occur when you use a form of "to be" plus the past participle form of a verb, such as "was killed" or "were purchased." Passive voice eliminates the actor in a sentence. Check out what happens when you use a modifier with passive verb: "Screaming wildly, the pumpkins were thrown by the boys." Maybe in a Halloween movie, but in real life, perhaps not. The passive verb "were thrown" gives the modifier "Screaming wildly" nothing to modify. Fix it by changing the passive verb to active, clarifying who's doing the action: "Screaming wildly, the boys threw the pumpkins."
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Watch out for words like "only," "almost," "even" and "nearly," because these modifiers are frequently misplaced. Make sure they appear directly before what they describe. Take a look at this sentence: "Annette only ate two cookies." The modifier, "only," appears before "ate," which suggests that the writer may have expected Annette to devour, crush or demolish two cookies -- not just eat them. Logically, the writer intended to clarify the number of cookies Annette ate. Fixing a misplaced modifier is easy -- just move it before what it modifies: "Annette ate only two cookies."
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